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-## Save your Tiddlers!
-
-It is very important that you backup your tiddlers locally befor upgrading.
-
-- Click on the cloud icon -> `Save snapshot for offline use`
+It is very important that you backup your tiddlers locally before upgrading: cloud icon -> `Save snapshot for offline use`
 
 To restore a local backup to the server, drag and drop your tiddlers backup file into your TiddlyWiki page.