From 901bdcffc4efc2f701d986ee7d292ee67027dd1c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Yunobot <simone@yunohost.org>
Date: Sat, 2 Nov 2019 15:07:36 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Petites corrections/reformulations mineures.

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 faq.md | 46 +++++++++++++++++++++++-----------------------
 1 file changed, 23 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)

diff --git a/faq.md b/faq.md
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+++ b/faq.md
@@ -5,24 +5,24 @@
 
 YunoHost packages are under free licenses GNU AGPL v.3.
 
-YunoHost is based on Debian, so on licenses of Debian based elements.
+YunoHost is based on Debian, so on Debian's components' licenses.
 
-Applications and applications packages have their respectives licenses.
+Applications and applications packages have their own licenses.
 
 
-#### What is the goal of YunoHost?
+#### What YunoHosts' goal?
 
-We believe that decentralizing the Internet, and people taking back control and
-responsability over their own data and services, is a crucial issue to guarantee
+We believe that decentralizing the Internet, and empowering people to take control and
+responsability back over their own data and services, is a crucial issue to guarantee
 a free and democratic society.
 
 The YunoHost project aims to democratize self-hosting.
 
-It provides a software that aim to make it easy for people to run and
-administrate their own server, with minimal knowledge and time required.
+It provides a software that aims to make it easy for people to run and
+administrate their own server, with minimal knowledge and required time.
 
 
-#### But what does YunoHost *do* exactly?
+#### But what does YunoHost exactly *do*?
 
 YunoHost may be called a distribution or an operating system, but it's actually
 "just" a simple layer added over the top of Debian, which does most of the hard
@@ -31,28 +31,28 @@ work for you.
 For instance, if you wanted to install Wordpress, you would need to type a bunch
 of commands to create some users, setup a web server, setup a SQL server,
 download the wordpress archive, uncompress it, configure the web server,
-configure the SQL database, and finally configure wordpress. YunoHost handle
-the technical mess and "type all these commands for you", so that you can focus
+configure the SQL database, and finally configure wordpress. YunoHost handles
+the technical details and "types all these commands for you", so that you can focus
 on what really matters.
 
 More info on [this page](whatsyunohost) !
 
 #### Can I host my own personnal website with YunoHost?
 
-Yes ! Have a look at the [Custom Web app](https://github.com/YunoHost-Apps/my_webapp_ynh).
+Yes! Have a look at the [Custom Web app](https://github.com/YunoHost-Apps/my_webapp_ynh).
 It provides an "empty shell" : after installing it, just upload your files
 (via SSH/SCP or SFTP) to the right location. You can have PHP and a SQL database
 if you need.
 
 
-#### Can I host many independents websites with different domain names?
+#### Can I host many independent websites with different domain names?
 
-Yes ! YunoHost is multi-user and multi-domain. Some applications like *WordPress* or *Web App Multi Custom*, are multi-instances, which means that the application can be installed many times.
+Yes! YunoHost is multi-user and multi-domain. Some applications like *WordPress* or *Web App Multi Custom*, are multi-instances, which means that the application can be installed many times.
 
 
-#### Why can't I access to applications via the IP address?
+#### Why can't I access applications via the IP address?
 
-The [SSO](https://github.com/Kloadut/SSOwat/) (single sign-on) cannot properly authenticate users when they access your server with only its IP. If you really can't configure the DNS properly, you can temporarily work around it by [modifying the `hosts` file (last §)](dns_local_network_en) on your computer.
+The [SSO](https://github.com/Kloadut/SSOwat/) (single sign-on) cannot properly authenticate users when they access your server with only its IP. If you really can't properly configure the DNS, you can temporarily work around it by [modifying the `hosts` file (last §)](dns_local_network_en) on your computer.
 
 
 #### What's YunoHost's business model?
@@ -64,13 +64,13 @@ or stickers :P).
 Considering that a few contributors are investing a large amount of time in the
 project, we are thinking about ways to make the project sustainable.
 
-This could be achieved via donations, public fundings, and a few contributors
+This could be achieved via donations, crowdfunding, and a few contributors
 have professional activities related to YunoHost.
 
 
-#### Can I make donations to the project?
+#### Can I donate to the project?
 
-Yes, you can ! YunoHost needs money to pay servers and domain names. We would
+Yes, you can! YunoHost needs money to pay servers and domain names. We would
 also like contributors to be able to continue contributing rather than look for
 jobs elsewhere.
 
@@ -98,17 +98,17 @@ and having some free time. Other than that, just doing what you can is already a
 It is described in [this document](yunohost_project_organization.md) :).
 
 
-#### Will you port YunoHost to [insert favorite distro] ?
+#### Will you port YunoHost to [insert favorite distro]?
 
 Short answer: No. We don't have the energy for it and this is irrelevant.
 
 <a data-toggle="collapse" data-target="#willyouportyunohost" href="#">Long answer</a>
 <div id="willyouportyunohost" class="collapse">
-<p>If you care about distrowars, or think 'Debian is dirty', you are not the public of YunoHost.</p>
+<p>If you care about distrowars, or think 'Debian is dirty', then YunoHost is not for you.</p>
 
-<p>YunoHost is aimed at non-tech people who just want their server to work. Debian has its flaws, but it's (one of?) the most widely known and used distribution for servers. It's stable. Most self-hosted softwares are one way or another compatible with Debian. It's easily hackable by anybody who's been doing a bit of CLI on their personal Ubuntu/Mint computer. There is no killer feature in other distributions that makes it relevant for YunoHost to switch or port it.</p>
+<p>YunoHost is aimed at non-tech people who just want their server to work. Debian has its flaws, but it's (one of?) the most widely known and used distribution for servers. It's stable. Most self-hosted software are one way or another compatible with Debian. It's easily hackable by anybody who's been doing a bit of CLI on their personal Ubuntu/Mint computer. There is no killer feature in other distributions that makes it relevant for YunoHost to switch or port to it.</p>
 
-<p>If this does not convince you, there are other projects running on other distributions or with different philosophy.</p>
+<p>If this does not convince you, there are other projects running on other distributions or with different philosophies.</p>
 </div>
 
 
@@ -127,5 +127,5 @@ Medium answer: Apps were packaged in .deb in the past. It was a nightmare. We're
 
 <p>YunoHost manipulates high-level abstractions (apps, domains, users, ...) and defines a standard setup (Nginx, Postfix, Metronome, SSOwat, ...) and, because of this, can handle the configuration for the user.</p>
 
-<p>If you still think deb packages can be hacked to do this, see previous answers.</p>
+<p>If you still think it's possible to handle everything by fiddling with .deb packages, see previous answers.</p>
 </div>