Merge pull request #1133 from yunohost-bot/anonymous-2019-10-11_03-42-54

[Anonymous contrib] Petites corrections/reformulations mineures.

faq.md

@@ -5,24 +5,24 @@
 
 YunoHost packages are under free licenses GNU AGPL v.3.
 
-YunoHost is based on Debian, so on licenses of Debian based elements.
+YunoHost is based on Debian, so on Debian's components' licenses.
 
-Applications and applications packages have their respectives licenses.
+Applications and applications packages have their own licenses.
 
 
-#### What is the goal of YunoHost?
+#### What's YunoHost goal?
 
-We believe that decentralizing the Internet, and people taking back control and
+We believe that decentralizing the Internet, and empowering people to take control and
-responsability over their own data and services, is a crucial issue to guarantee
+responsability back over their own data and services, is a crucial issue to guarantee
 a free and democratic society.
 
 The YunoHost project aims to democratize self-hosting.
 
-It provides a software that aim to make it easy for people to run and
+It provides a software that aims to make it easy for people to run and
-administrate their own server, with minimal knowledge and time required.
+administrate their own server, with minimal knowledge and required time.
 
 
-#### But what does YunoHost *do* exactly?
+#### But what does YunoHost exactly *do*?
 
 YunoHost may be called a distribution or an operating system, but it's actually
 "just" a simple layer added over the top of Debian, which does most of the hard
@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ work for you.
 For instance, if you wanted to install Wordpress, you would need to type a bunch
 of commands to create some users, setup a web server, setup a SQL server,
 download the wordpress archive, uncompress it, configure the web server,
-configure the SQL database, and finally configure wordpress. YunoHost handle
+configure the SQL database, and finally configure wordpress. YunoHost handles
-the technical mess and "type all these commands for you", so that you can focus
+the technical details and "types all these commands for you", so that you can focus
 on what really matters.
 
 More info on [this page](whatsyunohost) !
@@ -45,14 +45,14 @@ It provides an "empty shell" : after installing it, just upload your files
 if you need.
 
 
-#### Can I host many independents websites with different domain names?
+#### Can I host many independent websites with different domain names?
 
 Yes! YunoHost is multi-user and multi-domain. Some applications like *WordPress* or *Web App Multi Custom*, are multi-instances, which means that the application can be installed many times.
 
 
-#### Why can't I access to applications via the IP address?
+#### Why can't I access applications via the IP address?
 
-The [SSO](https://github.com/Kloadut/SSOwat/) (single sign-on) cannot properly authenticate users when they access your server with only its IP. If you really can't configure the DNS properly, you can temporarily work around it by [modifying the `hosts` file (last §)](dns_local_network_en) on your computer.
+The [SSO](https://github.com/Kloadut/SSOwat/) (single sign-on) cannot properly authenticate users when they access your server with only its IP. If you really can't properly configure the DNS, you can temporarily work around it by [modifying the `hosts` file (last §)](dns_local_network_en) on your computer.
 
 
 #### What's YunoHost's business model?
@@ -64,11 +64,11 @@ or stickers :P).
 Considering that a few contributors are investing a large amount of time in the
 project, we are thinking about ways to make the project sustainable.
 
-This could be achieved via donations, public fundings, and a few contributors
+This could be achieved via donations, grants, and a few contributors
 have professional activities related to YunoHost.
 
 
-#### Can I make donations to the project?
+#### Can I donate to the project?
 
 Yes, you can! YunoHost needs money to pay servers and domain names. We would
 also like contributors to be able to continue contributing rather than look for
@@ -104,11 +104,11 @@ Short answer: No. We don't have the energy for it and this is irrelevant.
 
 <a data-toggle="collapse" data-target="#willyouportyunohost" href="#">Long answer</a>
 <div id="willyouportyunohost" class="collapse">
-<p>If you care about distrowars, or think 'Debian is dirty', you are not the public of YunoHost.</p>
+<p>If you care about distrowars, or think 'Debian is dirty', then YunoHost is not for you.</p>
 
-<p>YunoHost is aimed at non-tech people who just want their server to work. Debian has its flaws, but it's (one of?) the most widely known and used distribution for servers. It's stable. Most self-hosted softwares are one way or another compatible with Debian. It's easily hackable by anybody who's been doing a bit of CLI on their personal Ubuntu/Mint computer. There is no killer feature in other distributions that makes it relevant for YunoHost to switch or port it.</p>
+<p>YunoHost is aimed at non-tech people who just want their server to work. Debian has its flaws, but it's (one of?) the most widely known and used distribution for servers. It's stable. Most self-hosted software are one way or another compatible with Debian. It's easily hackable by anybody who's been doing a bit of CLI on their personal Ubuntu/Mint computer. There is no killer feature in other distributions that makes it relevant for YunoHost to switch or port to it.</p>
 
-<p>If this does not convince you, there are other projects running on other distributions or with different philosophy.</p>
+<p>If this does not convince you, there are other projects running on other distributions or with different philosophies.</p>
 </div>
 
 
@@ -127,5 +127,5 @@ Medium answer: Apps were packaged in .deb in the past. It was a nightmare. We're
 
 <p>YunoHost manipulates high-level abstractions (apps, domains, users, ...) and defines a standard setup (Nginx, Postfix, Metronome, SSOwat, ...) and, because of this, can handle the configuration for the user.</p>
 
-<p>If you still think deb packages can be hacked to do this, see previous answers.</p>
+<p>If you still think it's possible to handle everything by fiddling with .deb packages, see previous answers.</p>
 </div>