Misc wording improvements

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Alexandre Aubin 2019-09-06 17:42:21 +02:00
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The wireless connections are not supported yet, and if you use intermediate routers, the network ports opening will not be automatic: Your server will not be accessible externally.
## <small>2.</small> Boot on CD / USB key
## <small>2.</small> Boot on CD / USB stick
Boot up your server with the USB key or a CD-ROM inserted, and select it as **bootable device** by pressing one of the following keys (hardware specific):
```<ESC>```, ```<F8>```, ```<F10>```, ```<F11>```, ```<F12>``` or ```<SUPPR>```
Boot up your server with the USB stick or a CD-ROM inserted, and select it as **bootable device** by pressing one of the following keys (hardware specific):
```<ESC>```, ```<F9>```, ```<F10>```, ```<F11>```, ```<F12>``` or ```<SUPPR>```
## <small>3.</small> Launch graphical installation

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## <small>2.</small> Démarrer sur le CD/la clé USB
Démarrez votre serveur avec la clé USB ou le CD-ROM inséré, et sélectionnez-le comme **périphérique de démarrage** en pressant lune des touches suivantes (dépendant de votre ordinateur) :
```<Échap>```, ```<F8>```, ```<F10>```, ```<F11>```, ```<F12>``` or ```<Suppr>```
```<Échap>```, ```<F9>```, ```<F10>```, ```<F11>```, ```<F12>``` or ```<Suppr>```
## <small>3.</small> Lancer linstallation graphique

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# Flashing YunoHost ISO on a USB key or CD/DVD
# Flashing the YunoHost ISO on a USB stick or CD/DVD
Now that you have the ISO image of YunoHost, you have to put it on a physical medium: **USB key** or **CD/DVD**
Now that you downloaded the ISO image of YunoHost, you should flash/burn it on a physical medium. Typically, this is done on a **USB stick** but you might want to use a **CD/DVD** for older machines.
<img src="/images/usb_key.png" width=150>
<img src="/images/cd.jpg" width=150>
---
## USB key
## USB stick
### With Etcher
@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ Download <a href="https://etcher.io/" target="_blank">Etcher</a> for your operat
<img src="/images/etcher.gif">
Put your USB key on, select your YunoHost ISO and click "Flash"
Plug your USB stick, select your YunoHost ISO and click "Flash"
### With UNetbootin
@ -23,12 +23,12 @@ Download <a href="https://unetbootin.github.io/">UNetbootin</a> for your operati
<img src="/images/unetbootin.png">
Put your USB key on, select your YunoHost ISO and click "OK"
Put your USB stick on, select your YunoHost ISO and click "OK"
### With `dd`
If you know your way around command line, you may also flash your USB key with
`dd`. Assuming your USB key is `/dev/sdb` (be careful !!), you may run :
If you know your way around command line, you may also flash your USB stick with
`dd`. Assuming your USB stick is `/dev/sdb` (be careful !!), you may run :
```bash
dd if=/path/to/yunohost.iso of=/dev/sdb

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# Flasher l'ISO YunoHost sur une clef USB ou un CD/DVD
Maintenant que vous avez téléchargé limage ISO de YunoHost, vous devez la mettre sur un support physique : une **Clé USB** ou un **CD/DVD**.
Maintenant que vous avez téléchargé limage ISO de YunoHost, vous devez la mettre sur un support physique. Classiquement, il s'agit d'une **Clé USB** mais pour certaines raisons vous pouvez aussi utiliser un **CD/DVD**.
<img src="/images/usb_key.png" width=150>
<img src="/images/cd.jpg" width=150>

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cd image && genisoimage -rational-rock -volid "YunoHost Live" -cache-inodes -joliet -full-iso9660-filenames -b isolinux/isolinux.bin -c isolinux/boot.cat -no-emul-boot -boot-load-size 4 -boot-info-table -output ../yunohost-live.iso . && cd ..
```
Great success! Now you can burn the .iso or use [Unetbootin](http://unetbootin.sourceforge.net/) to copy it on a USB key.
Great success! Now you can burn the .iso or use [Unetbootin](http://unetbootin.sourceforge.net/) to copy it on a USB stick.

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## Installation steps
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/images">0. Download your ISO image</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/images">0. Download the YunoHost ISO image</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/burn_or_copy_iso">1. Burn or copy ISO image</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/burn_or_copy_iso">1. Burn the ISO image on a USB stick</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/boot_and_graphical_install">2. Boot & install</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/boot_and_graphical_install">2. Boot the machine and run the installation</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall">3. Post-install</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall">3. Proceed with the initial configuration (post-installation)</a>
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## Étapes dinstallation
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/images_fr">0. Télécharger l'image ISO</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/images_fr">0. Télécharger l'image ISO de YunoHost</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/burn_or_copy_iso_fr">1. Copier limage ISO</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/burn_or_copy_iso_fr">1. Flasher limage ISO sur une clef USB</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/boot_and_graphical_install_fr">2. Démarrer & installer</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/boot_and_graphical_install_fr">2. Démarrer la machine et installer YunoHost</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall_fr">3. Post-installation</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall_fr">3. Effectuer la configuration initiale (post-installation)</a>
---

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<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/copy_image">1. Flash the SD card with the image</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/plug_and_boot">2. Plug & boot</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/plug_and_boot">2. Power up the board and let it boot</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/ssh">3. Connect to your server with SSH</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall">4. Proceed to post-installation</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall">4. Proceed with the initial configuration (post-installation)</a>
---

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<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/copy_image_fr">1. Flasher la carte SD avec l'image</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/plug_and_boot_fr">2. Brancher & démarrer</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/plug_and_boot_fr">2. Brancher la carte et la laisser démarrer</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/ssh_fr">3. Se connecter en SSH</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/ssh_fr">3. Se connecter en SSH sur le serveur</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall_fr">4. Procéder à la post-installation</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall_fr">4. Effectuer la configuration initiale (post-installation)</a>
---

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<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/copy_image">1. Flash the SD card with the image</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/plug_and_boot">2. Plug & boot</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/plug_and_boot">2. Power up the board and let it boot</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/ssh">3. Connect to your server with your web browser</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall">4. Proceed to post-installation</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall">4. Proceed with the initial configuration (post-installation)</a>
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<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/copy_image_fr">2. Flasher la carte SD avec l'image</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/plug_and_boot_fr">3. Brancher & démarrer</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/plug_and_boot_fr">3. Brancher la carte et la laisser démarrer</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/ssh_fr">4. Se connecter en SSH</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/ssh_fr">4. Se connecter en SSH sur le serveur</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall_fr">5. Procéder à la post-installation</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall_fr">5. Effectuer la configuration initiale (post-installation)</a>
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<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/install_manually">1. Install manually</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall">2. Post-install</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall">2. Proceed with the initial configuration (post-installation)</a>

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<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/install_manually_fr">1. Installer manuellement</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall_fr">2. Post-installation</a>
<a class="btn btn-lg btn-default" href="/postinstall_fr">2. Effectuer la configuration initiale (post-installation)</a>

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* Plug your server in wired Ethernet, or configure the wifi connection as explained [here](https://www.raspberrypi.org/documentation/configuration/wireless/wireless-cli.md). You can also mount the second partition of the SD card and edit the wpa-supplicant.conf file prior to boot the card for the first time - on Windows you can use [Paragon ExtFS](https://www.paragon-software.com/home/extfs-windows/), don't forget to unmount everytime for changes to take effect.
* Optional : You can **plug a screen** if you want to see how boot is going, and a keyboard if you want to have a **command-line access** to your server.
* Optional : You can **connect a screen** if you want to see how boot is going, and a keyboard if you want to have a **command-line access** to your server.
* Power up the server, wait for the first reboot to happen, and then wait until you see a big squared `Y` :